Today we had to write our own bold beginnings. Miss Taylor gave us a story starter and we changed it to make it exciting for our audience to read.
Yesterday I went for a ride on my new bike.
ACTION
I hopped on my bike and pedalled around the block - Olivia
My legs go round as I pedal along the path on my new bike - Jade
My feet were pushing down on the pedals on my new bike as I tried to climb a big hill – Riley
My legs were pounding as I was biking as fast as I could – Tyler
I pedalled down the steep hill before crashing my new bike into a tree – Jake
DIALOGUE
“Mum, Dad, I’m going for a ride on my new bike” I yelled out loud – Matthew G
“This is going too fast, how do I slow down ?!” I yell as a I crash into a window – Victoria
“Ahh what a nice day to go biking around the block” I said to mum as I hopped on my new bike – Olivia
“This is exhausting Dad, I’ve already done 6 laps!” I yell at Dad – Riley
THOUGHT/FEELING/QUESTION
I wish I knew how to, but I don’t, I don’t know how to change the gears I thought to myself – Abby R
I wonder how fast this thing can go? - Alex
I thought my new bike would be shiny and clean, but it’s rusty and dirty – Matthew P
I wonder if I can ride my new bike with no hands? - Cole
SOUND EFFECT
Crash! I just hit the garbage can – Jasmin
Zoom! I was riding on my new bike – Cole
Errrrr! Tire all over the road, I did a big skid! - Riley
Bang! I crashed my new bike into our new fence – Troy
Smash, I crashed into a branch on a tree swerving around an old lady – Tyler
Screech! The brakes are not working! – Fletcher
Yesterday I went for a ride on my new bike.
ACTION
I hopped on my bike and pedalled around the block - Olivia
My legs go round as I pedal along the path on my new bike - Jade
My feet were pushing down on the pedals on my new bike as I tried to climb a big hill – Riley
My legs were pounding as I was biking as fast as I could – Tyler
I pedalled down the steep hill before crashing my new bike into a tree – Jake
DIALOGUE
“Mum, Dad, I’m going for a ride on my new bike” I yelled out loud – Matthew G
“This is going too fast, how do I slow down ?!” I yell as a I crash into a window – Victoria
“Ahh what a nice day to go biking around the block” I said to mum as I hopped on my new bike – Olivia
“This is exhausting Dad, I’ve already done 6 laps!” I yell at Dad – Riley
THOUGHT/FEELING/QUESTION
I wish I knew how to, but I don’t, I don’t know how to change the gears I thought to myself – Abby R
I wonder how fast this thing can go? - Alex
I thought my new bike would be shiny and clean, but it’s rusty and dirty – Matthew P
I wonder if I can ride my new bike with no hands? - Cole
SOUND EFFECT
Crash! I just hit the garbage can – Jasmin
Zoom! I was riding on my new bike – Cole
Errrrr! Tire all over the road, I did a big skid! - Riley
Bang! I crashed my new bike into our new fence – Troy
Smash, I crashed into a branch on a tree swerving around an old lady – Tyler
Screech! The brakes are not working! – Fletcher